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A woman's sorrow

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A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 06, 2011 12:01 pm

A woman's sorrow

How long do I have to wait?
To torture my self and blame?
I couldn't ignore you or hate
Fire inside my heart does flame
You are my love, my soul mate
All things to you seems the same
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All women, like me, are weak
You don't care for my bad fire
We always search love and seek
And we try to hide our ire
Come touch my skin, it's so sleek
I have lust, I have desire
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My life will not last forever
So come relax my mind
With you I feel in fever
Killing eyes, I'm like a hind
Show me your lust, don't cover
Like my charm, where will you find?
You will still my sweet lover
I loved, really love is blind
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You got your wish and you went
I dream with you, spend the nights
Our days will soon end, they're lent
So come dear and burn the lights
Your home is my heart, you rent
With me you'll get touching sights
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Did the bird find another nest?
So why does the dove coo alone?
For years, she looks towards the west
And hopes him stop her hard moan
She waits and waits, she does her best
None's on skyline, she won't leave groan
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby sweets » Thu Oct 06, 2011 12:44 pm

my dear friend u alawys impress my thoughts heart and mind iwill post total comment when i back home cu
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 06, 2011 9:32 pm

hello
i'm waiting ur comment...
i hope u r very well....
regards
c u
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby Lara » Thu Oct 06, 2011 10:38 pm

shakespear wrote:You got your wish and you went
I dream with you, spend the nights
Our days will soon end, they're lent
So come dear and burn the lights
Your home is my heart, you rent
With me you'll get touching sights
*******************************
Did the bird find another nest?
So why does the dove coo alone?
For years, she looks towards the west
And hopes him stop her hard moan
She waits and waits, she does her best
None's on skyline, she won't leave groan
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Hi Shakespear!!! It's a wOnderful poem...well in the poem u r waiting for her, but it has been a long time, now u tells her what's happening, althoug u has spent much time you still have hope she responds...So i tell u that hope is the last thing we lose...so dont give up.
I loved this phrase : "Did the bird find another nest?" C U friend
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 06, 2011 10:49 pm

hi friend
i think u reserved the meaning koz she is waiting him not he and i hope u find the mistake...c u and have nice day
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby Lara » Thu Oct 06, 2011 11:03 pm

shakespear wrote:You got your wish and you went


:!!: oops...yes im sorry for that..well in this case maybe she made a mistake...she gave all for him, and he just wanned pleasure, maybe he doesnt come back to her...and she will stay waiting and waiting, and i think all women realize when anyone wont come back, in this case this love is blind.

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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 06, 2011 11:17 pm

hi
in the beginning u reversed the meaning but now u r talking very well.....but i meant by "love is blind " koz we love and don't know if our lovers good or bad and if they r bad we can hate them or ignore them and we still love them in spite of their hurt...
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby Lara » Thu Oct 06, 2011 11:33 pm

hmm that's right...but when we really love and realize our love is bad the best thing we could do is to let him go and not to hate him..because if we continue with him it will be worst, and then the wound would be deeper {-:
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Re: A woman's sorrow

Postby shakespear » Thu Oct 06, 2011 11:46 pm

ok
real love...if we have real love so we can't leave our lover although he/she is bad...we'll close our eyes ...we can't see our lover's badness, we see just his softness and beauty...we can't stop loving him/her....i know we'd better leave him/her ...but...
could we??????
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Postby Lara » Thu Oct 06, 2011 11:58 pm

shakespear wrote:could we??????


hmmm maybe if she/he wanna change we may give her/him a chance..but if she/he doesnt get it so the last thing we can do is to let her/him go, it's what i think
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