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A woman's sorrow
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our life is like a night mare
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imagine the sorrow of this woman...wt's her end???shakespear wrote:A woman's sorrow
How long do I have to wait?
To torture my self and blame?
I couldn't ignore you or hate
Fire inside my heart does flame
You are my love, my soul mate
All things to you seems the same
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All women, like me, are weak
You don't care for my bad fire
We always search love and seek
And we try to hide our ire
Come touch my skin, it's so sleek
I have lust, I have desire
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My life will not last forever
So come relax my mind
With you I feel in fever
Killing eyes, I'm like a hind
Show me your lust, don't cover
Like my charm, where will you find?
You will still my sweet lover
I loved, really love is blind
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You got your wish and you went
I dream with you, spend the nights
Our days will soon end, they're lent
So come dear and burn the lights
Your home is my heart, you rent
With me you'll get touching sights
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Did the bird find another nest?
So why does the dove coo alone?
For years, she looks towards the west
And hopes him stop her hard moan
She waits and waits, she does her best
None's on skyline, she won't leave groan
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I LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT EMBODIES THE SORROW OF A WOMAN
we have to live our life freely
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what is real love?shakespear wrote:ok
real love...if we have real love so we can't leave our lover although he/she is bad...we'll close our eyes ...we can't see our lover's badness, we see just his softness and beauty...we can't stop loving him/her....i know we'd better leave him/her ...but...
could we??????
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what do u think about real love???
i answered u by a question...ok ?
when u answer u'll find the answer for ur question
i answered u by a question...ok ?
when u answer u'll find the answer for ur question
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that's not the answer to my question. I asked you that same question so it couldn't be the answer.
is there real love and untrue love? love is love. So, I guess it is either love and a lie only.
is there real love and untrue love? love is love. So, I guess it is either love and a lie only.
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aha ok, may be u r r8...but i meant another thing...if u look at the matter u can't find but 1 love....but wt u call the love of the mother to her baby? wt u call the love of the son to his parents, wt u call the love of one to the beauty of a soul mate, some love the beauty of nature, some love sex, some love money, some love prestige position, reign, rule, authority, control......etc.
all these things comes under the concept of love
all these things comes under the concept of love
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I guess you mistook love for like and vice versa.shakespear wrote:aha ok, may be u r r8...but i meant another thing...if u look at the matter u can't find but 1 love....but wt u call the love of the mother to her baby? wt u call the love of the son to his parents, wt u call the love of one to the beauty of a soul mate, some love the beauty of nature, some love sex, some love money, some love prestige position, reign, rule, authority, control......etc.
all these things comes under the concept of love
For me, I do not use love for a thing or situation because they have no feelings. I can use the word love to human beings and my pet dogs. But, I don't know how others differentiate this. And, from what you have stated above they are all the same to you.
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mmmm so do u differ between all these kinds of love??if 1 says to his girlfriend" i like u" wt this means??
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I guess, it's because we have different beliefs. This is also why I raised the question, "What is real love?"shakespear wrote:mmmm so do u differ between all these kinds of love??if 1 says to his girlfriend" i like u" wt this means??
About your last question, I am sorry, I cannot answer that because I am a female. I really don't know when (or where else) do you use the word, "like". You see, a female friend of your friend (who is a boy or girl) is also a girl friend...then also for lovers, the male/boy use the same word also to introduce his sweetheart.
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may be we r not correspondent but we understand each other....i got wt u like to say and i think u got wt i wana say...WE r different because our ambiences, milieu..... r different
there r many topics and matters which r different according to the style and general form of my life and urs....
do you know some of these topics and matters??????
for instant; the shame, shyness, freedom,religion, sin and sinful...all these r different
there r many topics and matters which r different according to the style and general form of my life and urs....
do you know some of these topics and matters??????
for instant; the shame, shyness, freedom,religion, sin and sinful...all these r different
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I know some but not much just a bit. That's why sometimes I am hesitant to reply on your questions because I might be misunderstood only even if I have no bad intentions. Sometimes little differences become worst (even among friends) if some words has been misunderstood.shakespear wrote:may be we r not correspondent but we understand each other....i got wt u like to say and i think u got wt i wana say...WE r different because our ambiences, milieu..... r different
there r many topics and matters which r different according to the style and general form of my life and urs....
do you know some of these topics and matters??????
for instant; the shame, shyness, freedom,religion, sin and sinful...all these r different
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Even if our views differ and will remain friends because friendship beyond anything bigger than a misunderstanding, that's what I think, and thought to be a true, so i please you to express any opinion you find it appropriate and you will find me receptive for your opinion
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You must have a human history of mental maturity to be able to accept the opinions of others, no matter how extreme, as long as the upholding of religion and public morals
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it's very good in my opinion !
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which is good , poem or my opinion:beginner wrote:it's very good in my opinion !
any way thanks for your participationshakespear wrote:You must have a human history of mental maturity to be able to accept the opinions of others, no matter how extreme, as long as the upholding of religion and public morals
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