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Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Thu Oct 20, 2011 5:25 am
by sweets
sure i'll feel free

havea sweet day

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Sat Oct 22, 2011 4:59 am
by shakespear
hello
so what did u decide to do? issue it or not? really i prefer u issue it after correct ...its urs ..u created it and gave it ur idea..ur words...

have lovely day

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:48 am
by allison
How could you write about woman's sorrow since you're a man? Are you sure of how women feel?

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Fri Jan 27, 2012 7:35 pm
by shakespear
hi may be u r right in this point but i imagine the sorrow of woman and try to transmigrate the role of a woman and write sad feelings of her...any way nice to hear ur point of view...have nice moments

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Sat Feb 04, 2012 8:00 am
by farah
It is not easy to transmigrate a personality of some one specially if it is not the same sex.it is a lie...u r a female not a male.

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:53 am
by shakespear
farah wrote:It is not easy to transmigrate a personality of some one specially if it is not the same sex.it is a lie...u r a female not a male.
u can make sure of that if u come here near me....
have nice moments amore...

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2013 1:16 pm
by shahidsaif
Cool Cool info for me. :lol:

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Sun Jan 27, 2013 3:55 pm
by shakespear
shahidsaif wrote:Cool Cool info for me. :lol:
what does that means??
plz explain it...any way thanks lots

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2013 1:23 pm
by dreamer
hi can u guess who am i shakespear??

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2013 7:43 pm
by shakespear
hi all my friends...
dreamer...really idk...but ur name is so lovely...we all need to dream and fly in the blue sky...have nice moments...

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Tue Jun 18, 2013 12:26 pm
by shakespear
hi dreamer.....at last i could know u...but really if u didnt help me i couldn't know u ....any way i'm so happy to meet u again and know about u....
thnx to help me knowing u...
c u

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Fri Jan 08, 2016 1:28 pm
by shakespear
shakespear wrote:A woman's sorrow

How long do I have to wait?
To torture my self and blame?
I couldn't ignore you or hate
Fire inside my heart does flame
You are my love, my soul mate
All things to you seems the same
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All women, like me, are weak
You don't care for my bad fire
We always search love and seek
And we try to hide our ire
Come touch my skin, it's so sleek
I have lust, I have desire
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My life will not last forever
So come relax my mind
With you I feel in fever
Killing eyes, I'm like a hind
Show me your lust, don't cover
Like my charm, where will you find?
You will still my sweet lover
I loved, really love is blind
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You got your wish and you went
I dream with you, spend the nights
Our days will soon end, they're lent
So come dear and burn the lights
Your home is my heart, you rent
With me you'll get touching sights
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Did the bird find another nest?
So why does the dove coo alone?
For years, she looks towards the west
And hopes him stop her hard moan
She waits and waits, she does her best
None's on skyline, she won't leave groan
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imagine the sorrow of this woman...wt's her end???

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 5:46 pm
by farah
I LIKE THIS POEM BECAUSE IT EMBODIES THE SORROW OF A WOMAN

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2016 4:46 pm
by shakespear
do u have sorrow like hers???

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2016 1:22 pm
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:ok
real love...if we have real love so we can't leave our lover although he/she is bad...we'll close our eyes ...we can't see our lover's badness, we see just his softness and beauty...we can't stop loving him/her....i know we'd better leave him/her ...but...
could we??????
what is real love?

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2016 1:41 pm
by shakespear
what do u think about real love???
i answered u by a question...ok ?
when u answer u'll find the answer for ur question

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2016 5:20 am
by Krisi
that's not the answer to my question. I asked you that same question so it couldn't be the answer.

is there real love and untrue love? love is love. So, I guess it is either love and a lie only.

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2016 11:09 am
by shakespear
aha ok, may be u r r8...but i meant another thing...if u look at the matter u can't find but 1 love....but wt u call the love of the mother to her baby? wt u call the love of the son to his parents, wt u call the love of one to the beauty of a soul mate, some love the beauty of nature, some love sex, some love money, some love prestige position, reign, rule, authority, control......etc.
all these things comes under the concept of love

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2016 2:23 pm
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:aha ok, may be u r r8...but i meant another thing...if u look at the matter u can't find but 1 love....but wt u call the love of the mother to her baby? wt u call the love of the son to his parents, wt u call the love of one to the beauty of a soul mate, some love the beauty of nature, some love sex, some love money, some love prestige position, reign, rule, authority, control......etc.
all these things comes under the concept of love
I guess you mistook love for like and vice versa.
For me, I do not use love for a thing or situation because they have no feelings. I can use the word love to human beings and my pet dogs. But, I don't know how others differentiate this. And, from what you have stated above they are all the same to you.

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Tue Jan 19, 2016 3:04 pm
by shakespear
mmmm so do u differ between all these kinds of love??if 1 says to his girlfriend" i like u" wt this means??

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2016 4:23 am
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:mmmm so do u differ between all these kinds of love??if 1 says to his girlfriend" i like u" wt this means??
I guess, it's because we have different beliefs. This is also why I raised the question, "What is real love?"

About your last question, I am sorry, I cannot answer that because I am a female. I really don't know when (or where else) do you use the word, "like". You see, a female friend of your friend (who is a boy or girl) is also a girl friend...then also for lovers, the male/boy use the same word also to introduce his sweetheart.

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2016 11:11 am
by shakespear
may be we r not correspondent but we understand each other....i got wt u like to say and i think u got wt i wana say...WE r different because our ambiences, milieu..... r different
there r many topics and matters which r different according to the style and general form of my life and urs....
do you know some of these topics and matters??????
for instant; the shame, shyness, freedom,religion, sin and sinful...all these r different

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2016 1:47 pm
by Krisi
shakespear wrote:may be we r not correspondent but we understand each other....i got wt u like to say and i think u got wt i wana say...WE r different because our ambiences, milieu..... r different
there r many topics and matters which r different according to the style and general form of my life and urs....
do you know some of these topics and matters??????
for instant; the shame, shyness, freedom,religion, sin and sinful...all these r different
I know some but not much just a bit. That's why sometimes I am hesitant to reply on your questions because I might be misunderstood only even if I have no bad intentions. Sometimes little differences become worst (even among friends) if some words has been misunderstood.

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2016 2:21 pm
by shakespear
Even if our views differ and will remain friends because friendship beyond anything bigger than a misunderstanding, that's what I think, and thought to be a true, so i please you to express any opinion you find it appropriate and you will find me receptive for your opinion

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Wed Jan 20, 2016 2:26 pm
by shakespear
You must have a human history of mental maturity to be able to accept the opinions of others, no matter how extreme, as long as the upholding of religion and public morals

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2016 5:24 am
by beginner
it's very good in my opinion !

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2016 7:18 am
by shakespear
beginner wrote:it's very good in my opinion !
which is good , poem or my opinion:
shakespear wrote:You must have a human history of mental maturity to be able to accept the opinions of others, no matter how extreme, as long as the upholding of religion and public morals
any way thanks for your participation

Re: A woman's sorrow

Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2017 8:44 am
by shakespear
RENEW OLD POEMS