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Silence in Darkness

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Silence in Darkness

Postby angelodite » Tue Dec 10, 2013 2:42 am

I am now in the day, the day when suddenly the darkness come and covered the world, and I become blind since then.. all I can only see shadows.. It come and go with a silence.. and.. without I realize, the darkness has become a part of me..

Within the darkness.. everything are so quiet.. so..hurtful... The sparkle that used to be my guardian.. its gone.. gone like an ash.. it didnt left anything. When I am silence... noone around.. nothing to feel.. nothing to reach.."where is my sparkle?" I asked myself..

"I am scared.. my sparkle's gone..." "What should I do?" I cried and cried... tried to yell, but... no voice comes out... only tears were falling down.. I tried to look for something.. anything.. but only darkness and silence Ive found... the more I ve tried the powerless I am.. I cried and cried again.. til I am fall asleep, but when I wake up.. everything still the same... silence... I sat..hugged my self..staring...wandering and wandering..

Help me..
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Re: Silence in Darkness

Postby tamerali » Mon Dec 16, 2013 11:14 pm

We cannot perceive the light without the darkness.
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Re: Silence in Darkness

Postby shakespear » Thu Mar 27, 2014 2:19 pm

hi
i think it's a short story...there's an expression in it....i think u speak about a nightmare and the darkness and how it's dreadful...there are some mistakes in ur story...i hope u revise it and discover them...
go ahead...u r very good
c u
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