could you check sentences?

Vega · Post by **Vega** » Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:50 am

Hi. Which sentence makes a sense? It's for my website.

1. Push a boundary today.
2. Push the boundary today.
3. Push boundaries today.
4. Break a boundary today.
5. Break the boundary today.
6. Break boundaries today.

Thanks.

InLove · Post by **InLove** » Mon Jul 02, 2007 5:32 am

In my own,"Push a boundary today" seems to be meaningful and easy to fit readers. :o

Dixie · Post by **Dixie** » Mon Jul 02, 2007 6:59 am

What's your site about?

mr_Love · Post by **mr_Love** » Mon Jul 02, 2007 8:15 am

but what do mean by that ????

Vega · Post by **Vega** » Mon Jul 02, 2007 11:10 am

Dixie wrote:What's your site about?

I have registered a website http://www.xkalibur.by.ru, it's going to be my homepage. It's free, and they give you unlimited space but with limited monthly bandwith. So I will upload there my favorite mp3, books and etc. Now I'm working on the design, at spare time...

mr_love wrote:but what do mean by that ????

I am searching for a sentence...similiar like " ~because people speak English" :) ..That sentence is what comes to my mind.

...Tell me if you've got a better one.

By the way, can you check the link to see if its loading properly?..It's my first website I am mastering by myself.

Dixie · Post by **Dixie** » Mon Jul 02, 2007 12:14 pm

It loads perfectly. Nice eye 8)

I still don't know what you exactly mean: "break boundaries because people speak English"? :?

Vega · Post by **Vega** » Mon Jul 02, 2007 3:45 pm

Dixie wrote:It loads perfectly. Nice eye 8)

I still don't know what you exactly mean: "break boundaries because people speak English"? :?

:)No, without "because people speak English".

I noticed that some websites have their own specific sentence, for instance EC has "~because...",.. so I supposed to use that sentence as my website specific sentence. :?

ABMAC · Post by **ABMAC** » Wed Jul 04, 2007 4:46 pm

Xkalibur wrote:Hi. Which sentence makes a sense? It's for my website.

1. Push a boundary today.
2. Push the boundary today.
3. Push boundaries today.
4. Break a boundary today.
5. Break the boundary today.
6. Break boundaries today.

Your intention is to encourage people to go beyond the normal limits, so it would be more appropriate to say "cross a boundary today" or even "step outside a boundary today."

Bambang · Post by **Bambang** » Fri Jul 13, 2007 12:26 pm

Dear Xkalibur.

How about "Think outside the box"

or

"Ecxeed the limit"

In my business persfective, we'll be able to give you more ideas if we know eactly what's the focus of your website.

EC's motto is very suitable with the content of the website. It's also catchy and encouraging.

So, the first question is what strong image do you want to show us on your website? After you get the strong image, then you can analyse the suitable motto or jargon or vision for your website.

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