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please check this paragraph - mistake?

Postby jasper » Fri May 14, 2010 1:32 pm

Hello

Yesterday I wanted to contact Dr. Graham's office but I dialled the wrong telephone number by mistake.I realized I got the wrong number when I received an answering machine and I immediately ended my call.
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Re: please check this paragraph - mistake?

Postby hermit » Sat May 15, 2010 1:54 pm

Hi Jasper - just a couple of things...

"I realized I had the wrong number when I reached an answering machine...".

Everything else is OK.

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Re: please check this paragraph - mistake?

Postby Vega » Sat May 15, 2010 7:18 pm

May I ask a question to Mr. Hermit?

jasper wrote:Yesterday I wanted to contact Dr. Graham's office..


Is "contact with Dr..." also possible?

Thank you!
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Re: please check this paragraph - mistake?

Postby seaswan » Sun May 16, 2010 8:43 am

hi hermit,
I had a quastion the same Xkalibur
thanks.
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Re: please check this paragraph - mistake?

Postby hermit » Sun May 16, 2010 11:23 am

That would be "Yesterday I wanted to get in contact with Dr. Graham's..."
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Re: please check this paragraph - mistake?

Postby Tukanja » Fri May 21, 2010 6:53 am

hermit wrote:"I realized I had the wrong number when I reached an answering machine...".


Is it possible to say

I realised I had had the wrong number as I reached an answering machine..

Thanks
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