hi
can someone help me to rephrase these 2 phrases
"In order to provide the very best service for our customers, our staff is well trained initially, with ongoing skill enhancement through their careers with us"
"With AAA high level technology, we fully ensure this fulfillment of our customer's requireemnt in detail"
Thanks in advance for your support.
Please help me to reword these two sentences
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Re: Please help me to reword these two sentences
What is AAA? Is it your company name, or some kind of grading - or something else? This will help us to rephrase the sentence.
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Re: Please help me to reword these two sentences
It is the company name.
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Re: Please help me to reword these two sentences
How about...
To ensure the very best service for our customers, our staff receive excellent training and ongoing skills enhancement.
With AAA's high-level technology we ensure fulfillment of our customers' detailed requirements.
To ensure the very best service for our customers, our staff receive excellent training and ongoing skills enhancement.
With AAA's high-level technology we ensure fulfillment of our customers' detailed requirements.
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Re: Please help me to reword these two sentences
Dear Josef,
Thank you so much for your help. It works out perfectly. I may need your advise in the future.
Kind regards,
Suchada
Thank you so much for your help. It works out perfectly. I may need your advise in the future.
Kind regards,
Suchada
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Re: Please help me to reword these two sentences
Hi Suchada,
"Our staff is well trained initially with ongoing skill enhancement through their careers with us,to provide best services to our customers/clients."
"By implementation of high level technology from AAA,We can ensure the fulfillment of our customer's requirements in detail"
thanks;
David
"Our staff is well trained initially with ongoing skill enhancement through their careers with us,to provide best services to our customers/clients."
"By implementation of high level technology from AAA,We can ensure the fulfillment of our customer's requirements in detail"
thanks;
David
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Re: Please help me to reword these two sentences
Our ongoing well trained stuff and implemented AAA high level technologies provide up to date best services ensuring fulfillment of any customer's requirement in detail.