...this question for the lyrics...
Posted: Sun Aug 05, 2012 8:21 pm
Hello everybody,
Not being a native English speaker and always having a doubt when it comes to fine expressions in writing, I have this question for the lyrics of a song I write: which of the two stands better? Here:
"Earth and sea mingling... memories and winds… "
or
"Land and sea mingling... memories and winds…"
Thanks for your feedback and finest vibes!
BD
Not being a native English speaker and always having a doubt when it comes to fine expressions in writing, I have this question for the lyrics of a song I write: which of the two stands better? Here:
"Earth and sea mingling... memories and winds… "
or
"Land and sea mingling... memories and winds…"
Thanks for your feedback and finest vibes!
BD