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sportsfan
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Please correct my grammar and vocabulary usage

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Hi, I'm going to share a Santa Claus song video on my facebook but I'm not sure what to say on my facebook status.

Should I say "While I've already known the truth about Santa Claus, this song is nevertheless still one of my favourite Christmas songs."?

Would you correct my grammar and vocabularies here please? Thank you.
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Re: Please correct my grammar and vocabulary usage

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While already know the truth about Santa Claus, this song is nevertheless one of my favourite Christmas songs.

OR

While already know the truth about Santa Claus, this song is still one of my favourite Christmas songs.
"We are not wholly bad or good, who live our lives under Milk Wood :-| " — Dylan Thomas, Under Milk Wood

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