EnglishClub
Home Learn English Teach English MyEnglishClub

Please note that these ESL Forums are NOT part of MyEnglishClub. To post at these ESL Forums please register ↑ first.


how can i recast this sentence?

Members help members on grammar, vocab, pronunciation...

Moderator: EC

how can i recast this sentence?

Postby nandana » Mon Jul 08, 2013 5:19 pm

It's a pleasant sight to watch the burning sun bleed into the azure sea, under the gloaming sky.
nandana
New Member
 
Posts: 3
Joined: Wed Jun 05, 2013 5:16 pm
Status: English Learner

Re: how can i recast this sentence?

Postby Tukanja » Fri Jul 12, 2013 1:08 pm

Let me try

A burning sun bleeding into the sea under the gloaming sky over the Cote d'azure was an enchanting sight.
User avatar
Tukanja
Gold Member
 
Posts: 459
Joined: Wed Jul 16, 2008 3:47 pm
Status: English Learner


Return to Help Each Other with English

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 9 guests