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Sentence correction 2

Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2004 3:01 pm
by Hung Tao
Please correct my following sentence:
Beauty is a concept varying according to each person's opinions.
Thanks in advance.

Re: Sentence correction 2

Posted: Wed Sep 15, 2004 7:39 pm
by Joe
Possible as is but might be more natural as:

Beauty is a concept that varies according to each person's opinions. :r: