sentence structure and clarity
Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2004 4:08 pm
Greetings,
Does the following caption have:-
1. sentence structure; and
2. clarity?
"I was watching a documentary featuring a town called Omnicon.
Omnicon is the coldest town on earth where the temperature falls below 0C, to -72C."
Your comments please.
Thank you!
Does the following caption have:-
1. sentence structure; and
2. clarity?
"I was watching a documentary featuring a town called Omnicon.
Omnicon is the coldest town on earth where the temperature falls below 0C, to -72C."
Your comments please.
Thank you!