Sentence Correction 1

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Hung Tao
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Sentence Correction 1

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Please correct my following sentence:
Streets and bridges in this areas will be repaired and upgraded to assure easy travel and smooth traffic.
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Re: Sentence Correction 1

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Streets and bridges in thESE areas will be repaired and upgraded to assure easy travel and smooth traffic-FLOW.

(changes in caps.)
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