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Sentence Correction 1

Posted: Sun Oct 24, 2004 11:40 am
by Hung Tao
Please correct my following sentence:
Streets and bridges in this areas will be repaired and upgraded to assure easy travel and smooth traffic.
Thanks in advance.

Re: Sentence Correction 1

Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2004 7:01 am
by Alan
Streets and bridges in thESE areas will be repaired and upgraded to assure easy travel and smooth traffic-FLOW.

(changes in caps.)