I'm proofreading a script for a visual novel, and the writer of this script uses "though" and "although" very often as linking words at the start of sentences. For example:
John: He was assigned the task of taking care of me.
John: Though, he wasn't very pleased to hear it.
or:
Tim: He said that he aced the exam.
Tim: Although, I sensed a bit of tension in his voice.
I know that technically it isn't grammatically correct, and I don't really agree entirely with it, but I've been turning a blind eye to it for a while now. I figured it might be an acceptable liberty to take for a script, similar to, say, starting a sentence with a conjunction.
Either way, I just wanted to get some more opinions on this. Is it an eyesore seeing "though" used like that?
"though" and "though" usage
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Re: "though" and "though" usage
The uses you cite here are neither particularly natural nor acceptable for formal/written usage.
'Though' (but not 'although') often serves as a postposed (concessive) adverbial conjunct, e.g.
” I sensed a bit of tension in his voice, though.”
but this is restricted to conversational usage.
For formal purposes, 'however' is more appropriate.
'Though' (but not 'although') often serves as a postposed (concessive) adverbial conjunct, e.g.
” I sensed a bit of tension in his voice, though.”
but this is restricted to conversational usage.
For formal purposes, 'however' is more appropriate.