a. A conversation about his unruly behaviour, when he was drunk, was very beneficial.
Does this sentence work?
'When he was drunk' is supposed to modify 'his unruly behaviour' non-restrictively.
Many thanks
When he was drunk
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Re: When he was drunk
Deleting the commas would make the grammatical relations clearer.