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Please help me correcting my writing

New postby speco » Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:44 am

For Security cameras

Basically in these days I think It 's a good idea to put cameras in public places. I mean for three reasons.
First of all, they help reduce crimes rates: Youre not going to do something rwong if you know that the cameras are watching you;
Secondary, they help polices solve crimes: The polices have pictures as a proof to show you you did something wrong;
Another thing is to make people feel safer: People feel safer everywhere they are because they know cameras are watching every thing.
It 's a good idea to install cameras in different public places.
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Re: Please help me correcting my writing

New postby fastforward » Sat Nov 07, 2009 9:00 am

Hi everybody.
In my current job I have to take care of my spellings and grammar. Due to work load, I have to write fast and continuously. So, it is hard for me to have control on spellings and grammar. So, tell me the solution for the same.
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Re: Please help me correcting my writing

New postby IvyEyesEditing » Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:09 am

Hi there!

In this subforum, we give a broad overview of suggestions for improving your writing in the long term, and we don't really 'correct' writing per se, like the post you included below.

However, we would be happy to give you some general tips for how to structure this piece. Is this for an email? Do you sell security cameras? Where is this piece of writing headed? Once you let us know that, we'll have a better idea of how to guide you and tweak your content.

Many thanks,
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