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Re: I would have asked this to my teacher but i am not in edu

Postby dimorphic » Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:47 pm

My grammar isn't good, and probably shouldn't be used as an example; however, I would rephrase the sentence to look something like this:

Although I had already read many scientific case studies and articles on the internet; I first became interest in biology when I was handed a copy of “knowing where to scratch”, as part of my summer homework.

or

As advised by my science teachers, I read many scientific case studies and articles on the internet; however, I first became interest in biology when I was handed a copy of “knowing where to scratch”, as part of my summer homework.

Hopefully this is of some benefit.
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