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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 6:21 pm
hi everybody
i a student in department of english
level 3
my teacher , asked from us to write about Habits
and i wrote this paragraph and i hope from the experts to see if they conform to the structure of paragraph
Bad Habits in Children
Habits are those things that doing always by people and repeating these thnigs until become familiar for them .
and it is dividing into good habits and bad habits . from bad habits in children is fingers sucking used by some children to escape from one of the problems or to express anger or tension , this raises the concern of parents about how to get rid of that problem .
Also from bad habits biting nails and appear in children from one to two years and continue to grow up with him , is a reflection for psychological disorder has a tension and anxiety as a result for pressures at home or school , it serves as an exit for him from his feelings of guilt or fear.
So should on parents, educators re-shape the behavior of the child by developing his behavior and give it a prize of material or moral whenever reduce his bad habit .
i a student in department of english
level 3
my teacher , asked from us to write about Habits
and i wrote this paragraph and i hope from the experts to see if they conform to the structure of paragraph
Bad Habits in Children
Habits are those things that doing always by people and repeating these thnigs until become familiar for them .
and it is dividing into good habits and bad habits . from bad habits in children is fingers sucking used by some children to escape from one of the problems or to express anger or tension , this raises the concern of parents about how to get rid of that problem .
Also from bad habits biting nails and appear in children from one to two years and continue to grow up with him , is a reflection for psychological disorder has a tension and anxiety as a result for pressures at home or school , it serves as an exit for him from his feelings of guilt or fear.
So should on parents, educators re-shape the behavior of the child by developing his behavior and give it a prize of material or moral whenever reduce his bad habit .