story (game prologue)

[Lugre]

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Once, I was just sitting in this little tavern near the lake, when suddenly two freelances burst into the pub and put up a picture of a young smiling lady in a beautiful purple dress on the wall. In a jiffy, people assembled around it, whispering. I ordered another beer instead and went on with my usual activity.

It was around midnight. And I was left in the pub alone. That painted whore, who had wanted the last handful of change in my pocket, had also already given it up. I don’t want these cheap hookers. I’d rather want a girl who can hold me back, despite her cute little face. I could change for her. Perhaps I ain’t so bad guy....

I finished the rest of my beer and put the empty mug on the oak table. When I was walking towards the exit, the picture of the girl in the purple dress caught my eye. I stopped and skimmed the text. It’s a princess, as I have discovered. They’re looking for a dude who can rescue her from the prison on the eastern island. She’s the reward and so is her considerable inheritance.

This is my chance! You gotta help me get out of this filthy ****hole.