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Could you correct my curriculum, please?

Postby fredericoskw » Sun Feb 13, 2011 11:40 pm

Hello, because I am not an English native speaker could you please check my curriculum? I would be very grateful. Thanks!!

Here is my CV

I have shown myself to be self-motivated, committed and determined in achieving my goals. I have also demonstrated negotiating and organizing skills, a sense of responsibility and my capacity to work hard under pressure. I am able to relate to a wide range of people, as proven by my varied work experiences.

2008-2012 Escola Politécnica - USP
Graduating in Industrial Engineering – graduation expected in december/2012.

2005-2007 Colégio Santa Cruz
High School.

Professional Experience
2011 Banco BBM
Summer Job in the Macroeconomic Research Department of Banco BBM during the period of January/2011 to February/2011.
• Constructed a panel of data on 25 countries, covering the main macroeconomic aggregates and financial indicators.
• Developed an econometric model to determine the equilibrium interest rate.

2010-2011 Undergraduate research project: Life Cycle Assessment of Sustainable Products (in development).
PIBITI/CNPq/USP grant holder. Project directed by Dr. Marly Monteiro, of the Production Engineering Department of Escola Politécnica - USP.

2009-2010 Big Bear Mountain
Participated in the Work&Travel USA program during the period of December/2009 to March/2010. Worked as Rental Attendant in Bear Mountain ski resort, Califórnia - EUA.

2008-2009 Poli Júnior
Worked with consultancy projects and events as manager at Poli Júnior, junior enterprise of Escola Politécnica - USP.
• Founded the newspaper Projeção:
o Guided a seven-person team.
o Conducted meetings and negotiations.
• Member of the organizing team of the recruiting fair Workshop Integrativo Poli Jr.
• Assisted in two projects for external clients.
• Member of the Financial Team.

Other Courses and Awards
2010-2012 Scholarship for academic excellence by GE Foundation “Scholar-Leaders Program 2010”.
Leadership development program to complement the student’s academic curriculum.

2010 Professional Development Program (12 hours) – Outward Bound Brasil – São Paulo, July/2010.

2010 Award for best project – Information Systems I (PRO2511) course - São Paulo, June/2010.

2009 Desafio Sebrae 2009 (passed to the state semi-final) – Sebrae – São Paulo, May/2009.

Portuguese: Mother Tongue.
English: Fluent (currently studying).
TOEFL iBT: 107/120 - Educational Testing Service.
French: Intermediate (currently studying).
DELF/ A3 - French Ministry of Education.

Activities and Interests
Volunteer at Um Teto para Meu País (NGO).
XXX National Meeting of Production Engineering (ENEGEP) – São Carlos, October/2010.
Participation in long-distance swimming and running competitions.
Playing Keyboard.

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Re: Could you correct my curriculum, please?

Postby Oriani » Sun May 01, 2011 3:51 am

What exactly do you need? By the way, congratulations...You have a very good Rèsumè...
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