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Narrate Story, grammar error?

Postby AukI » Sun Jul 03, 2011 4:50 pm

Dear All,

I have to narrate a situation in which your life was threatened not accident. So I wrote it and but I haven't put any titles yet.

I hope you guys can help me to give a title to it. I was thinking of "Abrupt Call!" or "An Exam, Nightmare!" .

Story must have a topic sentence following the title. And I don't know if all the grammar are correct or not , or matches the topic sentence or not.

Thank you all in advance

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Last year, abruptly my phone rings! The person I hated most in my college life claim to be my friend shouting from other side, that today I had an exam on Bangla-II paper. I was sitting with my friend watching a movie and playing chess. After hearing about the exam, my temper got high because it was all abrupt and I was already one and an half hour late from the regular schedule. I threaten him in a strong voice that I would punch him in his face if he turns out to be wrong. At that very moment I was thinking of movies that I had watched recently, if can I solve that current situation in any different way. But unfortunately, life is not a movie; I uniformed myself and stormed out of my home. By the time I reached at the exam hall, I got approximately fifty minutes left; which is a nightmare to complete the whole paper in time. My first entrance in the examination hall was quite surprising to all and it gave me a ride to the vice principal’s room to describe my late situation. Although he was so kind and let me continue my exam. After passing all those circumstances, I was able to sit on the exam hall and it was only had forty-two minutes left to complete the exam. Although I had finished the whole paper in time but couldn’t read a word from my subjective section. In conclusion, that practical experience was a harsh teacher to me, luckily I got sixty-six on that paper but after that I got more sincere about exam dates and times.

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