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Please help me check a letter of thanks

Postby ziawj » Sun May 06, 2012 2:35 pm

Please help me check the letter of thanks to make it fluent, acceptable to native speakers. Thank you!

May 3, 2012
Dear Lucy,
I am writing this letter to thank you for your flowers. This is a wonderful gift, and I like them greatly.
I am free recently. If it is convenient for you, I hope you could visit my home. And I want to send a gift for your beautiful flowers.
I am looking forward to you. Give my best wishes to your family!

Yours,
Peng Bochen
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