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desire to excel
Posted: Sun Dec 23, 2012 11:54 am
by gymys
hai, need your help.
"What I lack now, I will make it up for desire to excel."
Is this sentences correct or have any grammar error?
Thanks
Re: desire to excel
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2012 4:06 am
by Joe
I'm afraid your sentence is not structured correctly and in fact makes no real sense.
What I
think you mean is:
What I lack now I will make up for through my desire to excel.
OR
I will make up for what I lack now through my desire to excel.
Re: desire to excel
Posted: Mon Dec 24, 2012 5:30 pm
by gymys
okay, Thank you so much Josef, Appreciate your help.
That's what i mean.
Then how about the sentence
"What I lack now, I will make it up"
Is this sentence correct? or incomplete?