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Is this a correct sentence?

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The ship moves into the sea, and it slowly begins to disappear as the clouds/mist covers it. Slowly the entire ship disappears, and the clouds disappear by suddenly scattering in the sky.
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Re: Is this a correct sentence?

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The ship moves into the sea, and it slowly begins to disappear as the clouds and mist cover it. Slowly the entire ship disappears, and the clouds disappear by suddenly scattering in the sky.
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