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ridiculous law

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ridiculous law

Postby chool » Sun Sep 28, 2003 11:27 am

everybody is sad
the weather is bad
there's no toy

for girl or boy

the world is nice
but at a price
taking your chance
and get you dance
getting your dice
to give you rice
surely a little
for a cattle

HUSSEIN EBRAHIMI FROM IRAN[/size]
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    chool
     

    Re: ridiculous law

    Postby Guest » Thu Oct 02, 2003 5:23 am

    chool wrote:everybody is sad
    the weather is bad
    there's no toy

    for girl or boy

    the world is nice
    but at a price
    taking your chance
    and get you dance
    getting your dice
    to give you rice
    surely a little
    for a cattle

    HUSSEIN EBRAHIMI FROM IRAN[/size]
      [/code]
      [/quote]

      very good!
      Guest
       

      Re: ridiculous law

      Postby hossein ebrahimi » Tue Oct 14, 2003 11:47 am

      chool wrote:everybody is sad
      the weather is bad
      there's no toy

      for girl or boy

      the world is nice
      but at a price
      taking your chance
      and get you dance
      getting your dice
      to give you rice
      surely a little
      for a cattle

      HUSSEIN EBRAHIMI FROM IRAN[/size]
        [/code]
        [/quote]
        hossein ebrahimi
         

        Re: thinks

        Postby memeber » Tue Oct 14, 2003 1:46 pm

        I wuold like to thank you for your nice poem .
        It is verey consize and meaningful, try your best to do better.
        the weather is bad
        there's no toy

        for girl or boy

        the world is nice
        but at a price
        taking your chance
        and get you dance
        getting your dice
        to give you rice
        surely a little
        for a cattle

        HUSSEIN EBRAHIMI FROM IRAN[/size]
          [/code][/quote][/quote]
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              memeber
               


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