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The day I lost my father...

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Postby Francisca » Tue Jun 03, 2003 12:40 am

:) , Today I learnt something important thank to you...some days ago I had a fight with my father, I think it was a stupid fight, I know...but for 10 days we have not talked any word, but any time that he is going to work I am asking God that he cares of him and that he come back home ...But on june 15th it is father's day here in Chile , I am proud about this celebration, because I think that it is the only country that has that celebration day , and I had a sorprise for him for that day, but I am going to give him that sorprise now thanks to you.....

Kisses for u, it was a very important message :D
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Postby yara » Fri Oct 17, 2003 1:06 pm

Hi
I am realy sorry for you .. I love my father , in fact I can n't exist without hem
He is agood dad , always take care of me and my brothers..
I well love him for all my life

YaRa
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father !

Postby lonely-girl » Tue Jun 15, 2004 8:06 am

Yes , I agree with you that losing father is really sad .But it is the happiness to have a Father .For some children like me ,we don't have a Father to love and to be loved .My father left me when I was not born .Really I don't have a felling for him .It is so cruel ,I know ,but it is his fault .
Hope every chirldren have a Dad !

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Postby Guest » Wed Jun 16, 2004 9:36 am

i think i understand ur sentiments
i also lost my papa 11 years ago ,when i was a mere 6_year_old girl.I miss my papa alot.Whenever i see my papa 's pictures or my friends playing with hes fathers or whenever i hear "soledad"of Westlife,i feel suffer and cry .........
My image is always around me,i feel my papa protecting even when i do something dangerously.
i also love my mummy very much ,she has tried to work to food us since my papa died.I afraid of the day when we r grow & join into the world ,my mum will feel tierd & lonely .I must try to do all things to make my mum happy ,but i really dont think that i can make my mum forget my papa.IN our heart ,he is only greatest man.
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Postby internet _cafe » Wed Jun 16, 2004 9:46 am

so love the things u r having !
it 's all i want to say with u
i will never forget my papa and i will try to work hard to offer my mummy a good living
Daisy
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papa

Postby internet _cafe » Wed Jun 16, 2004 9:47 am

so love the things u r having !
it 's all i want to say with u
i will never forget my papa and i will try to work hard to offer my mummy a good living
Daisy
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Re: papa

Postby johnsion » Wed Jul 14, 2004 3:16 am

hello.i can understand your sentiment,too.
missing dear ones is a very bad thing.no one hopes that!but something you and me and other person all can't change!we had to face them .
good luck to you!
your friend J 8)
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