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Postby Fizz » Sun Oct 12, 2003 10:08 am

:)
I saw your face
I saw your smile
Make me wonder
What inside your heart

I never realise this before
That I could like you even more
Eventhough knowing you before
Why this feelings never show

I felt happy when I'm with you
Full of smiles from me to you
I wish you're noticed that I like you
Make me wonder that will you like me too

I try to be strong in many ways
Try to hide this feeling away
Hope you not knowing that I like you
It will be strangeness between two

I dont think that wise to do
To write a love letter just for you
Just put Secret Admirer that will do
You will not knowing its from me to you

I can't stop thinking about you
Make me hate myself, I tell you
I wish it will stop sooner or later
Only time will tell just to remembered

My heart felt empty
When I'm thinking of you
Make me sad and hate
To have this feeling for you

I can't explain my feeling to you
My heart start break into two
See your face from far away
Just wondering if you could stay

Stay within my heart

Forever

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p/s :- pls ignore my english mistakes as i'm still learning. TQ (^^?
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Bravo!!!

Postby Ez » Sun Jul 11, 2004 9:52 am

You are a great writer!!! Can you give me some tips in writing? Thanks!!! :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Thanks

Postby Fizz » Sat Jul 17, 2004 11:13 am

p(^-^)q hi ez, thank you for your compliment.. im not sure im a good writer.. when im wrote that poem.. im thinking of that person and the words suddently came.... eventhough my english kinda.. fuzzy..

when i want to write a poem.. i just writing down all the words that im thinking.. combine it together.. edit it.. and make it sound nice.. read it to someone and asked what they think about that poem..

i hope it will help you a little bit.. sorry... if it cant help you much.. :(

good luck ez.. if you make one.. plz let me know.. love to read your poem... :D
p(^ ^)q
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Postby _Arale_ » Thu Jul 29, 2004 6:26 am

Hi Fizz ,
Your poem is wonderful . Where are u from ?Let's make many other poems ok ? I enjoy it !
Nice to see u !

_Arale_
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thanks

Postby Fizz » Sat Jul 31, 2004 5:11 pm

hi arale

thanks.. i am glad that you like it... im from malaysia.. its has been a while i didnt write english poem.. perhaps later... i will post a new one... =)

nice to see you too
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