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Wish I could write well. But no matter what, I hate writing many long sentences unless I know I'll get something really valuable in return. :(
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Oh My God ! Asep,how long your post is !I don't meant sentenses.Asep,did you do your homework? :evil:

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huh?!?! i'm not seeing any. :?: :?: :?: :roll: :roll: :roll:
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There aren't any :evil:
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Dixie wrote:There aren't any :evil:
ok.. so that's why.... i thought it's a technical thing again. sorry..... i'm being slow again..... :oops: :lol: :lol: :lol: :roll:
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A long blank post.... :shock:
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Dixie wrote:Interesting Image Makes you think Image
yah... i agree... :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
made me laugh as well when i found out that i was being stupid again... thinking and was really confused when there's really nothing to be confused. :roll: :roll: :roll: :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Asep wrote:Wish I could write well. But no matter what, I hate writing many long sentences unless I know I'll get something really valuable in return. :(

What do you mean with 'something really valuable in return'? :o























































































































































































































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The joke's on us...
He should've posted it in Jokes... :D
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Post by francine »

good idea. hey, asep. why don't you transfer it instead. oops... on the second thought...it's the moderator who should be doing that right?
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Depends on who the moderator is :P
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Like I said, I hate writing long sentences unless I know I'll have something really valuable in return. Hehe.... :)
So the repeated ENTERs were the only way I could take advantage of to make it look like a long short story. Hehe.... :D :D

But why don't you guys take a close look at the first entry above. Now who's making a joke? :lol: :lol:

OK, dear, put this topic somewhere else, will you? :wink:
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No, I can't, I'm not the mod here :D
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