SUMMER LOVE

by **Lee** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 11:44 am

Nice poem....thats great...

You seem to eager to know about love Babycricket?? :wink:

by **francine** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 2:28 pm

babycricket wrote:The sweet, rustic smell of the rain
Fills my nose, my head and my brain
The springtime shower soaks my dress
And toes tingle with a grassy caress
The beauty of this day is lost to me
As the deaf man hears not the melody
For all the Nature's wonders seem so dim
When I am here standing next to him

actually, i think this should be posted in the poem's forum instead. this is a nice poem. but should be under the appropiate forum. you could repost it there so that we could ask one of our moderators here to delete it or better yet to move this topic to the poem's forum. :wink:

HELLO THERE MODERATORS!!!!!!! :wink:

by **Dixie** » Thu Oct 28, 2004 10:10 pm

mmmmmmmm

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

Ok I'm moving it

by **Dixie** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 9:18 am

Always at your disposal

by **francine** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:37 pm

hey! i knew we could count on our moderators here. :wink:

you're really great!

by **Dixie** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:40 pm

Hahaha look who's also fond of smileys!

by **francine** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:41 pm

Dixie wrote:Hahaha look who's also fond of smileys!

yeah... i'm really enjoying it.

by **RedRose** » Fri Oct 29, 2004 2:48 pm

yeah, this poem is really great!
on comparison with my poems, babycricket's poem is so romantic and decent!

No wonder that my teacher wanted to expel me!

I should learn to write peoms well from babycricket, in that case, two teachers of mine, Unknownsu and Dixie, will keep me...

SUMMER LOVE

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