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Postby Pearl » Thu Oct 14, 2004 6:53 pm

Hellllllo :D


This is part of a letter you receive from your English penfriend.

I guess you’ll get this when you’ve just come back from your holiday .I’d like to hear about it. Where did you go? What did you do there? What sort of place did you stay in?

·Write 100 words on your answer sheet.
Now write a letter to this penfriend.


[b]Introduction[/b]

Dear maryam,

How are you? I hope you well. I have just received your letter and you would like know about my holiday?

[b]Where did you go?[/b]
Actually, I went to museum with my family and saw a traditional thing. Then , I went to restaurant to eat delicious food . I was going to cinema but unfortunately I had an accident and could not go.


[b] What did you do there?[/b]
Besides, I was playing tennis with a red team to improve my skill sports and I was watching theater about poetry. I also read a book in the library in a long time.

[b]What sort of place did you stay in?[/b]

Fortunately, I went to stay in 5 star hotel with my family but hotel was more expensive than other but I’m interesting there.

I ‘m looking forward to writing as soon as possible.

Best wishes,
Pearl
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Postby Alan » Fri Oct 15, 2004 3:27 am

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