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Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?

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Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?

Postby shokin » Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:33 pm

Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !

Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !

(yes, very short :lol: )

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Postby Hardi » Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:53 pm

Yes very nice, but u could shorten it even more. Just say "I'm shokin!" :lol: :lol:
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Postby babara » Sun Dec 24, 2006 3:13 pm

Hardi wrote:Yes very nice, but u could shorten it even more. Just say "I'm shokin!" :lol: :lol:


:lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby shokin » Sun Dec 24, 2006 3:28 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol:


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Postby Vega » Mon Dec 25, 2006 9:25 am

:wink:
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Re: Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?

Postby Lara » Sun Oct 16, 2011 5:13 pm

either you cry or laugh :lol: not both
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Re: Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?

Postby shakespear » Tue Oct 18, 2011 6:13 am

shokin wrote:Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I don't know ! I'm crazy !

Do I cry ? Do I laugh ?
I'm lucky ! I'm happy !

(yes, very short :lol: )

Shokin

my friend shokin i like this short poems and i think i can make it long but its urs and i dont wana trespass ur poems
..... congratulations
go ahead and do like this but try to make it long i think u have the talent
thnx
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