Even black is white

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Even black is white

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"NICEST POST OF THE MONTH"

Even black is white

You are more tired than ever.
You have only worked today.
You had just some minutes for rest.
But you'd be more tired when bored.

Your father is ill, your mother is worried.
Your brother drinks too much.
Your sister does not find any job.
But you are healthy and you can study.

Grandfather is ded, grandmother is far away.
Uncle Sam is playing wargames, aunt Glory is playing lottery.
Godfather thinks only about his job. Godmather wants only to be alone.
But you can find the person that you know the best.

Cars make noise, planes break silence.
People shout, scream and howl.
Children cry, worries resound.
But your favourite music will never leave you.

Many people do war, even many more are hungry.
Few people are happy, less are wise.
Nearly everybody is like a sheep, a minority developes consciousness.
But you keeps being optimistic.

Humanity is becoming chaotic.
Earth, nature and space are maltreated.
Is it destiny of our consciousness ?
Or simply a bad dream, a bad trip ?



You cannot say that everything is black and white.
But you cannot either say that black and white do not exist.
Even black is white.
Even in the dark you can find a shark.

If you have the chance to find a star in each of your black clouds,
You are already happy.
Because this star is single
And illuminates everything.



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Post by Oriani »

Oh!!! Is it about you??? I liked this one :
Your father is ill, your mother is worried.
Your brother drinks too much.
Your sister does not find any job.
But you are healthy and you can study.
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No, don't be afraid. It's fictive. :lol:

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Oriani wrote:Oh!!! Is it about you??? I liked this one :
Your father is ill, your mother is worried.
Your brother drinks too much.
Your sister does not find any job.
But you are healthy and you can study.
me too oriani.,.i like this part too.,.,.,.

thx a lot shokin :D
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Post by Arale »

Wonderful! Shokin! :D Just a question, can you really be happy when you live in such a family and world? :roll:
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Post by fortminor »

nice poem , It could be guessed it is the nicest post of the month. :)
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congratulations shokin

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on your winning the nicest post of the month...thats wonderful!
and no i didn't leave forever, but i found new places i needed to do things in too....
i hope sometimes you will all come and say hi too
me in the new page i've been making in myspace

just checking in to say hello
find me here mostly
http://www.myspace.com/DreamingTK

my e-address changed too...
*******.

again I am happy for you...nice post!
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Arale wrote:Wonderful! Shokin! :D Just a question, can you really be happy when you live in such a family and world? :roll:
Yes, you can... according to me.

But... I had just said that it was a fiction. :mrgreen:

Nicest poem of the month ? congratulations shokin ! :mrgreen: I just cannot believe it.

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shokin wrote: Yes, you can... according to me.
I do agree! :mrgreen:
shokin wrote:Nicest poem of the month ? congratulations shokin ! :mrgreen: I just cannot believe it.
Shokin
LOL! Shokin! Congratulations!:mrgreen:

Anyway, happy new year!:wink:

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Shokin, congratulations! :D
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Post by babara »

WOW!! Nicest post of the month!!
Congratulations, Shokin and I think It is really nice. :P :P
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Congratulations, man!
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Thank you all !



Already two prices on my count ! :lol: :twisted: :lol:



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Post by Dexter »

wow... nice, shokin...well done :D

all the bests :)
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Post by keeper »

Well done...shokin,what a wonderful work(actually,i'm envious of your writing,haha),i'm sure it will be the Nicest Post,"fighting!!!"
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