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ENDLESS DAY

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ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:26 am

Can you – please – look at me merrily?
My winter always needs your spring
Can you – please – talk with me slowly?
When you speak you seem to sing
You speak not in words but in rhyme
Everything in the world is worthless
I enjoy hearing you for long time
And my day, then would be endless
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Postby Vega » Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:36 am

A very good poem, :D Bravo Shakespeare !
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Postby babara » Thu Jan 18, 2007 2:37 pm

Hmm..agree...NICE!!
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Postby shokin » Thu Jan 18, 2007 10:21 pm

It is normal, it is Shakespear !

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Postby babara » Sat Jan 20, 2007 8:52 am

shokin wrote:It is normal, it is Shakespear !

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Hmm..You are right!! :D :lol:
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Postby Sunnypk » Sat Jan 20, 2007 12:55 pm

nice poem
It's too good
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Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 21, 2007 7:58 am

THANKS ALOT ALL OF YOU . SHOKIN ! DONT YOU THINK ONE IS IN NEED TO ENCOURAGEMENT . THANK YOU AGAIN
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Postby shokin » Wed Feb 21, 2007 3:27 pm

Yes, we all need encouragements ! even Shakespear and shokin !

We are waiting for your next poems, hanging tongue.

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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:08 am

shokin my friend I miss you.It `s a long time .I want to hear about you .Good luck .
our life is like a night mare
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Re: ENDLESS DAY

Postby denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:10 am

A sad poem......
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

PIETY-The stories of parents and children
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