A desire of love.

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A desire of love.

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I am the girl who loves you more

I am the girl who wants to give you all

Why can't you see what I feel?

Just come to me...see me... love me...



Oh! God.. I can't wait for him to love me.. Is that so difficult?

As the time goes by, my soul dies

But when I think of you, It is so great the way I wake up again, my soul, my body, my everything.



Your love will be my spirit

Your love will be in my body

But there is something that I am pretty sure,

That your love will be always MINE!!!

I LOVE YOU.. just you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Post by Vega »

What a nice poem! :P :P ..I wish somebody said that to me.

Rasheed wrote:It's remind me poems of Omar Ibn Al-Fared ... or Omar Al- Khyam..
I've got a little book of Al-Khyam's rubai (or rubayi, I mean quatrains, but in russian lang.)
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I'm glad that you liked it, guys!! I wrote it 4 days ago.. ( I'm taking a poetry seminar) and Now I write poems from time to time!! And I wish someone said the same to me, too, Xkalibur.

Rasheed: Yes, it's similar, as I see. Maybe because everyone has those feelings that need to be written!!!
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Rasheed wrote:
As the time goes by, my soul dies

But when I think of you, It is so great the way I wake up again, my soul, my body, my everything.



Your love will be my spirit
It's good when you see that some people still believe in the romance in current dark age..
Yeah.. and I know that person doesn't feel the same for me! :cry:
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Hello Oriani
It's very nice poem, and I think that you have much talent.
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Sufistic.

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This poem is sufistic.

I like it.
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Post by (((Edu))) »

Oriani,

Nice words.

Congratulations. :!:
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(((Edu))) wrote:Oriani,

Nice words.

Congratulations. :!:
Oh, how sweet. Thanks!
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Nice poem again!! :D
Maybe because everyone has those feelings that need to be written!!!
Yeah, you're right.Everyone have those feeling to express but for me sometimes it's hard to say so can do only keep it.
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Rasheed wrote:
babara wrote:Everyone have those feeling to express but for me sometimes it's hard to say so can do only keep it.
It's too hard to hid that kind of feelings, anyway your feelings will appear whatever you try to put the masks…

If you can hide your love, really you are so powerful.
Yeah, you're right. :) I know it's hard to keep that feeling and I am not so powerful to do that forever but I am not so brave to show it directly also... :?
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I undesrtand you , guys, but have you ever thought that writing is a powerful tool that you can use so that you can improve your writing skills and your imagination? I do it writing poems! I have written a lot of them.
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Oriani wrote:I undesrtand you , guys, but have you ever thought that writing is a powerful tool that you can use so that you can improve your writing skills and your imagination? I do it writing poems! I have written a lot of them.

Sounds a good idea.

I'll do it.
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Oriani wrote:I undesrtand you , guys, but have you ever thought that writing is a powerful tool that you can use so that you can improve your writing skills and your imagination? I do it writing poems! I have written a lot of them.
Yes,it's a good idea and I can see you do it well also! :D
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Writing is good because you can discover plenty of English words. or even in your native lagunage, that you don't know yet!
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Oriani wrote:Writing is good because you can discover plenty of English words. or even in your native lagunage, that you don't know yet!
Perfect.
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