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JuVy
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by JuVy »
"NICEST POST OF THE MONTH"
Just beneath the wall
Along with the corners of my mind
Behind the bars of lies
When hopes tag along
And tears fall freely
Into an ocean of uncertainty and longing
Beside me is a lonely girl
Trapped in the crime of infidelity
Still willing to give
A bleeding heart
Patches can be made
But scars live long
She mourns for fairness
Asks for some understanding
And be loved in return
I've been so passionated in writing this
Not knowing
This very girl in the story is Me...
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Arale
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by Arale »
Your poem is very nice and deep! I like this small poem. Congratulation! Nicest post of July 2007!^^
_Arale_
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lluviax
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by lluviax »
It's beautiful
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maksoora
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by maksoora »
great feelings u could express it
am watting for new from u