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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:54 am

denvinbo wrote:That is his state of mind..........


Hi denvinbo,
Yes, I know that. But is it wrong to know? Do you really think it's nice to think in this way?
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Re: poem

Postby denvinbo » Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:38 am

I think he is missing someone........
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:39 am

denvinbo wrote:I think he is missing someone........


How'd you think of that? Don' make a story here. :)
You're not him, are you? :P
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Re: poem

Postby denvinbo » Thu Feb 14, 2008 11:43 am

I haven't make any story yet............... :)
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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 12:51 pm

Denvinbo, a single word could possess a lot of different meanings, to plenty of people with different culture. :)
A word may not or could mean too much to me but this is not applicable to all because we really think in different ways. :)
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Re: poem

Postby shakespear » Thu Feb 14, 2008 12:57 pm

krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks
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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Thu Feb 14, 2008 1:04 pm

shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks


Thanks.
Maybe I have got no more feelings because I couldn't write anymore. :)
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Re: poem

Postby Bambang » Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:24 pm

shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks


Not everything we feel should be revealed. :D
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Re: poem

Postby sweets » Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:44 pm

i like this poem it's sensitive one
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Re: poem

Postby Krisi » Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:32 am

bambang wrote:
shakespear wrote:krisi my friend we all must write what we feel inside our hearts . thanks


Not everything we feel should be revealed. :D


Thanks Uncle B. I'll remember this for the rest of my life. :)
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