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LIVING TOGETHER

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LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Fri Jan 26, 2007 7:32 pm

Don't leave me Oh dear, catch me more tightly
I feel I shall melt, I lose my force
My heart's very weak, it beats slightly
Nothing can take you; I'm with you in any course
Fly highly don't fear... like birds in the sky
Wherever you want to go, my will to go with you
Let's live a sweet life, together we must try
Even you want to die; I'll die with you too
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Postby Sunnypk » Sat Jan 27, 2007 3:46 am

Nice poem It's really terrific
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Postby babara » Sat Jan 27, 2007 7:29 am

Sweet poem... :)
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Postby Vega » Sat Feb 03, 2007 7:22 pm

Nice poem shakespare, indeed.

Even you want to die; I'll die with you too

Yeah, Bravo shakespare!
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Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 04, 2007 4:54 am

Thanks
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Postby Dexter » Sun Feb 04, 2007 5:37 am

nice poem, shakespear... very good :D
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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:15 am

babara "I want to hear about you,and we all miss you.We like your comments and explanation .Please contact with us and good luck .
our life is like a night mare
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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby denvinbo » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:09 am

This poem's mean is normal but deep........
Hey! I'm stuck! Get me out!

PIETY-The stories of parents and children
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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Sun Feb 17, 2008 6:55 am

babara I`ll contact with you. thanks for your missing me .
denvinbo thanks for your interesting .
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Re: LIVING TOGETHER

Postby shakespear » Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:05 am

Thanks to everyone who misses me and I hope meet you in good times .GOOD LUCK .
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