GOOD BYE

by **shakespear** » Thu Jan 11, 2007 10:37 am

She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……

by **fadi** » Thu Jan 11, 2007 3:02 pm

hi shakespear
really nice poem.,.,i really like it,.,.keep goin my friend

PS>>>>plz write your locaton IRAQ in a capital letters.,.its your country man

u must be proud of it

Website · by **Vega** » Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:31 pm

Wow!!!! Very romantic words

by **babara** » Thu Jan 11, 2007 4:46 pm

Very nice!!

by **shakespear** » Fri Jan 12, 2007 3:31 pm

thanks for all I want to become friend to all

by **shakespear** » Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:22 am

Hi fadi ,where are you ? I really miss you .Could I hear your new news ? Good luck my dearest friend .

by **denvinbo** » Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:08 am

shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye

I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her

She hurt my heart, she flew so high

She filled my life with love which's rare

I lived with her in a sweet dream

I said to her: could I kiss you?

Could you give me a hope, a beam?

She said at once: Yes but only few ……

Although it's a bit short.....I think it's good...........

by **shakespear** » Sun Feb 17, 2008 7:00 am

my friend denvinbo if I can express my feelings in one words I`ll do.Thanks .

by **denvinbo** » Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:23 am

Go ahead..........

by **Krisi** » Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:39 am

denvinbo wrote:Go ahead..........

hahahaha... :lol:

I really thought you would cry. :lol:

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