GOOD BYE
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GOOD BYE
She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
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Hi all
thanks for all I want to become friend to all
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Re: GOOD BYE
Hi fadi ,where are you ? I really miss you .Could I hear your new news ? Good luck my dearest friend .
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Re: GOOD BYE
Although it's a bit short.....I think it's good...........shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
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Re: GOOD BYE
my friend denvinbo if I can express my feelings in one words I`ll do.Thanks .
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Re: GOOD BYE
Go ahead.......... :)
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Re: GOOD BYE
hahahaha... I really thought you would cry. :Pdenvinbo wrote:Go ahead.......... :)
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Re: GOOD BYE
I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........
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Re: GOOD BYE
you rascal! :Pdenvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........
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Re: GOOD BYE
:Pkrisi wrote:you rascal!denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........
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Re: GOOD BYE
What happen to you? :P :P You stole my smiley....denvinbo wrote::Pkrisi wrote:you rascal!denvinbo wrote:I'm a boy......not a girl like you, krisi...........
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But you are smiling........krisi wrote:What happen to you? :P :P You stole my smiley....denvinbo wrote::Pkrisi wrote: you rascal!
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Re: GOOD BYE
what happen to you guys
Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhe
both of you are so funny
and to you shakespeare your poem very romantic
have anice day.....,
Hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhe
both of you are so funny
and to you shakespeare your poem very romantic
have anice day.....,
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Re: GOOD BYE
krisi wrote:What happen to you? :P :P You stole my smiley....denvinbo wrote::Pkrisi wrote: you rascal!
it's unbelievable! you didn't steal my smiley. Thanks, dear! :P :P :Pdenvinbo wrote: But you are smiling........
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Re: GOOD BYE
I'm a good people....hehehehe
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Re: GOOD BYE
Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
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Re: GOOD BYE
Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :P: !!!shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
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If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............krisi wrote:Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :P: !!!shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
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OK! :Pdenvinbo wrote:If you say that, you will be a female monster, krisi............krisi wrote:Oh, I'm sorry Shakespear, it was not for you. I was joking Denvinbo and please reread our post ... just observe how he stole my smiley... be careful... he will evolve into a monster later on... hahahahaha :P: !!!shakespear wrote:Hi krisi . Why do say like this ?
I`m optimestic and not want to cry . Be careful and good luck .
Shakespear, good to read you... bye...
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hahaha.......This global will have a monster....:P
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Re: GOOD BYE
Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
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Re: GOOD BYE
Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!!shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
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Krisi wrote:Hi shakespear, I'm crying with you, don't worry!!!shakespear wrote:Hi Krisi I think you read what is really in my heart ,but I want someone cries with me .
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OK! I'll follow.shakespear wrote:Hi krisi ,if you cry with me I`ll cry.
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What do you mean? :| Are you doubting?shakespear wrote:Hi .But I don`t think that.
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Re: GOOD BYE
Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
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Re: GOOD BYE
:)shakespear wrote:Krisi ,I don`t think that.
I think you`ve to cry............................. hahahahaja...........
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Re: GOOD BYE
So far I have no intention to compete with you... :Pshakespear wrote:I THINK Y`LL CRY NOT ME BECAUSE U CAN`T WRITE POEM.
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Re: GOOD BYE
I think u r really who must cry because y don`t write something creative. goodluck.
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Re: GOOD BYE
I like short poems.
Better to leave people wishing there was more than otherwise. :D
Better to leave people wishing there was more than otherwise. :D
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Re: GOOD BYE
hi...i like it...
emmm....can u make a poem about me.....
hehehehe....
:D :D :D
emmm....can u make a poem about me.....
hehehehe....
:D :D :D
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thank u nemo
i can but I need to know sth about u
goos luck
i can but I need to know sth about u
goos luck
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Re: GOOD BYE
woow my friend . i like it so much..it's very romantic words..
thanks for ur lines...
thanks for ur lines...
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Re: GOOD BYE
Listen my dear to the beating of my heart.shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
Parting for me is such a sweet sorrow.
I may be gone forever but the memories will live on...
Gone are the days when we are filled with hope and aspirations.
Gone are the whispers that revive our feelings.
Gone are the cares that tells us to hold on... what more to hold, what else to keep only but the sweet memories that remain as the time unfolds. Goodbye my heart.
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]
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Re: GOOD BYE
nice poem, but it's kinda short. i hope there's a longer version for this. thanks for sharing!
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Re: GOOD BYE
hi every one
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye
i wanna meet u all
i wish to
our life is very short and the loveliest part in it is meeting friends and sharing happiness and sadness with them.
meet u
good luck
bye
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Re: GOOD BYE
nice words,but i don't understand others said
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hi friend
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye
happy new year to all friends here and have happy times
what did not u understand?
tell me and i`ll answer u,ok?
c u soon bye
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Re: GOOD BYE
i think its very gd and has simple language,underestood.gooooooooooooo ahead
we have to live our life freely
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Re: GOOD BYE
shakespear wrote:She waved her hand good bye... Good bye
I searched all ways, I couldn’t catch her
She hurt my heart, she flew so high
She filled my life with love which's rare
I lived with her in a sweet dream
I said to her: could I kiss you?
Could you give me a hope, a beam?
She said at once: Yes but only few ……
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