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Little hope

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Little hope
She occupied my memory
And left me with sorrow alone
I can't forget her features
I called her in please tone
"Can you let me with you?
I want to be your own
What happened for our love?
Your heart is like a stone
Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
She replied no answer
My sorrow has grown
And she made one gesture
I wished to hear a phone
Her gesture meant speech
"That she didn't care for moan
our life is like a night mare
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shakespear wrote: Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
:) Were you fat before? :P
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beautiful :wink:
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every single word enter my heart smoothly i really congratulate u of word choosen

i do not know why ur writes carries the idea of separtion and weakness due to this love :|


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sweets wrote:every single word enter my heart smoothly i really congratulate u of word choosen

i do not know why ur writes carries the idea of separtion and weakness due to this love :|


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Yes, sweets you got what I mean...I'm also wondering. :roll:

But,

Shakespear were you fat before? :P
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Hi everyone .
krisi,thanks . I wasn`t fat before ."skin and bone " metaphore .
Sweet thanks a lot .Where are you from ?
Ms.A.z thanks and good luck .
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Krisi wrote:
shakespear wrote: Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
:) Were you fat before? :P
shakespear wrote: ...I wasn't fat before. "skin and bone" metaphor.
hmm, metaphor... :P
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hello
well iam talking now while the f16 is shooting somewhere :(

so did u know where iam from :?: :?: :?:

i think u get it
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Hi sweet , I think you `re from Lebanon , Aren`t you ?
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well
ur guess is totally wrong :(
iam form Palestine

see u
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Hi sweet .Trust me ,I u r from palestine after I sent u the massege. Good luck.
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:shock:
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Very nice dear

Keep it up! :)
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hi sweet . u r really brave people, and I can see ray of hope in the horizon.Good luck.
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Hi
Our life is very short so we must utilize it
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I like ur lines thanks dear..
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I want to here about u
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shakespear wrote:Little hope
She occupied my memory
And left me with sorrow alone
I can't forget her features
I called her in please tone
"Can you let me with you?
I want to be your own
What happened for our love?
Your heart is like a stone
Look at me my sweet heart
I became skin and bone"
She replied no answer
My sorrow has grown
And she made one gesture
I wished to hear a phone
Her gesture meant speech
"That she didn't care for moan

Every pain I take creates a little piece of my life.

I fell, stand and gathered the fragments of my broken self. Piece by piece I put them together but never to feel the same person I once was...
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]
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The pain I bear, the tears I shed
is the sad song of my wounded heart.
[color=#404000][i]We cannot control the evil tongues of others, but good life enables us to disregard them.[/i][/color]
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Hi allison
By ur 2 letters u make e crying & weeping .
Ur words r sad.
go ahead.
goodluck & c u later
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hi every one
I can see ray of hope in the horizon.
have nice times
good luck
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hi everyone and goodluck
our life is like a night mare
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hi
holla
its gd poem
we have to live our life freely
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She didnt care about ur feelings; but at the end did u see a glimmer of hope??
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Lara wrote:She didnt care about ur feelings; but at the end did u see a glimmer of hope??
lovely comment
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shakespear wrote:Hi allison
By ur 2 letters u make e crying & weeping .
Ur words r sad.
go ahead.
goodluck & c u later
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I think words that really came from the writers heart can be felt by the reader...
Thanks for your remark Shakespear.
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hi friend...u r welcome and u r r8...words that come from inside the heart enter easily to the hearts...good luck
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RENEW OLD POEMS
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