LOVELY FACE

[shakespear]

LOVELY FACE
Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Your cheeks `re like apples
Sweet taste in the mouth
Your lips are like fig
I always wish to taste them
Hastely..Hastely come to me
I'm sick in the bed
All the beauty in your face
Your face is a great world

[sweets]

wooooooooooooooooooow
it seems that iam the first one to read ur poem today

well
i see a big change in ur tone but i fell that there is a symbliosm in this poem am right or?????????

keep on this soul
cheeeeeeers

[Sunnypk]

you have done very good job:)

keep it up

[Krisi]

Shakespear,
Sweets is right your tone has changed but I still find it funny... I think you're a funny person. rascal!
You perk up my day... Thanks!

[shakespear]

thanks for everuone.
sweet,ur the 1st one who read my poem.thanks
krisi you can`t arouse me and I think you`re bastard or bitch because you describe me as rascal.
I think you`re in need to be intercoursed

[Sunnypk]

it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose of views

Hope you understand well

.

[Krisi]

shakespear

Could you please check rascal in your dictionary. It's used to describe a small child who has a fondness for causing trouble in a playful way. Not as what you have in mind. That's why I connected it after saying you're funny. I regard it more as a compliment cuz I know we're no more kids...
Well, if you have a negative meaning to it, I want you to know that I have nothing in mind. I just looked at everything as a play upon reading your poem.
I'm sorry if I've been misunderstood and honestly have no bad intentions in saying it. I was not thinking that it would be taken in a negative way.
Well thanks anyway.

[Krisi]

it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose of views

Hope you understand well

.

Thanks Sunnypk.

[Sunnypk]

it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really
allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as
being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose my views

Hope you understand well

.

Thanks Sunnypk.

you are always welcomed Dear Krisi

[Krisi]

it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really
allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as
being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose my views

Hope you understand well

.

Thanks Sunnypk.

you are always welcomed Dear Krisi

Why is your welcome in the past tense?