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LOVELY FACE

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LOVELY FACE

Postby shakespear » Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:58 am

LOVELY FACE
Your eyes`re like stars
Lit the sky in the dark
Your cheeks `re like apples
Sweet taste in the mouth
Your lips are like fig
I always wish to taste them
Hastely..Hastely come to me
I'm sick in the bed
All the beauty in your face
Your face is a great world
our life is like a night mare
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Re: LOVELY FACE

Postby sweets » Wed Mar 19, 2008 2:15 pm

wooooooooooooooooooow
it seems that iam the first one to read ur poem today :)

well
i see a big change in ur tone but i fell that there is a symbliosm in this poem am right or?????????


keep on this soul
cheeeeeeers
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار
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Re: LOVELY FACE

Postby Sunnypk » Wed Mar 19, 2008 8:46 pm

you have done very good job:)

keep it up
As you so, so shall you reap
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Re: LOVELY FACE

Postby Krisi » Thu Mar 20, 2008 4:18 am

Shakespear,
Sweets is right your tone has changed but I still find it funny... :P I think you're a funny person. rascal! :P
You perk up my day... :) Thanks!
click --> Happy Valentine!
always.



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Re: LOVELY FACE

Postby shakespear » Thu Mar 20, 2008 8:44 am

thanks for everuone.
sweet,ur the 1st one who read my poem.thanks
krisi you can`t arouse me and I think you`re bastard or bitch because you describe me as rascal.
I think you`re in need to be intercoursed :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops: :oops:
our life is like a night mare
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Re: LOVELY FACE

Postby Sunnypk » Thu Mar 20, 2008 10:02 am

it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose of views

Hope you understand well

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Re: LOVELY FACE

Postby Krisi » Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:25 pm

shakespear

Could you please check rascal in your dictionary. It's used to describe a small child who has a fondness for causing trouble in a playful way. Not as what you have in mind. That's why I connected it after saying you're funny. I regard it more as a compliment cuz I know we're no more kids...
Well, if you have a negative meaning to it, I want you to know that I have nothing in mind. I just looked at everything as a play upon reading your poem.
I'm sorry if I've been misunderstood and honestly have no bad intentions in saying it. I was not thinking that it would be taken in a negative way.
Well thanks anyway.
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Re: LOVELY FACE

Postby Krisi » Thu Mar 20, 2008 2:45 pm

Sunnypk wrote:it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose of views

Hope you understand well

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Thanks Sunnypk.
click --> Happy Valentine!
always.



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Re: LOVELY FACE

Postby Sunnypk » Thu Mar 20, 2008 3:28 pm

Krisi wrote:
Sunnypk wrote:it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really
allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as
being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose my views

Hope you understand well

.


Thanks Sunnypk.


you are always welcomed Dear Krisi :)
As you so, so shall you reap
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Re: LOVELY FACE

Postby Krisi » Fri Mar 21, 2008 12:39 am

Sunnypk wrote:
Krisi wrote:
Sunnypk wrote:it's too rubbish shakespear. you are not really
allowed here to abusing someone. I know it's none of my business but as
being a member of EC. I just consider right to expose my views

Hope you understand well

.


Thanks Sunnypk.


you are always welcomed Dear Krisi :)


Why is your welcome in the past tense? :roll:
click --> Happy Valentine!
always.



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