Broken life, empty soul
Can't see behind the sky
Can't go through this nightmare
Cause I've lost everything
To fight this madness, I must reborn
I'll fight this monster living inside of me
This broken life must be broken
I'm waiting for you
All the time I have
All the time you ned
You have to feel the hell I live in
You will see after that I'm just a pawn
Nothing more
I'll follow the train of life, and make a new one
Cause I will survive ignoring all this sadness
The most important is mission in this life
Before the other life after my death
Waiting you comments!!!
Broken
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- Krisi
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Re: Broken
Very nice poem!imad wrote:Broken life, empty soul
Can't see behind the sky
Can't go through this nightmare
Cause I've lost everything
To fight this madness, I must reborn
I'll fight this monster living inside of me
This broken life must be broken
I'm waiting for you
All the time I have
All the time you ned
You have to feel the hell I live in
You will see after that I'm just a pawn
Nothing more
I'll follow the train of life, and make a new one
Cause I will survive ignoring all this sadness
The most important is mission in this life
Before the other life after my death
Waiting you comments!!!
Welcome back Imad...
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Re: Broken
hi imad
it's so powerful i like it so much
and as krisi said WELCOME BACK
cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
it's so powerful i like it so much
and as krisi said WELCOME BACK
cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeers
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Re: Broken
Thank you sweets and krisi.
Yes that's right, I was absent for near a year bacause I was busy. I studied a long year to pass my exam, and it's very important to go to the university.
Yes that's right, I was absent for near a year bacause I was busy. I studied a long year to pass my exam, and it's very important to go to the university.
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well, i hope for you to join university soon what are u going to study ???????????????
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I want study medicine.
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Re: Broken
that's good may Allah gives u power it's so hard but if u like something it becomes easy
cheeeeeeeeers
cheeeeeeeeers
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Re: Broken
Oh^^!!;
Let me tell you that you're so senstive ,your poem makes me feel a lot of warm feelings ,
May GOD bless you
Let me tell you that you're so senstive ,your poem makes me feel a lot of warm feelings ,
May GOD bless you
2 years later, I'll became a teacher of English;I'll get quite joy whenever I'll use my English^^