Daddy!
How naïve I was!
You endured me
Day in and day out!
I, your eldest,
Never gave a damn
Still, you were awesome.
Now,
I remember you;
With due respect.
Love you;
Every ounce.
When I think I am old enough
I understand you better!
Only, I have you not to share.
To share, how I feel about you.
Life is mystery daddy,
Sometimes full of life
Yet, with few emptiness.
But I remember you, nevertheless.
Oh! How I wish I had you
How I wish I can share things with you
How I wish I had enough time;
To show you how much I love you…
Pls give me comments on graammar/usage of words
Daddy
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Re: Daddy
Dad deserves much much more, only i dont have him with me to give what he deserves. He passed away long back, and i miss him so much at every bounce in my life.
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Re: Daddy
Very nice poem,cuz I think that only few people write poems about fathers,people more write poems about mothers .
If you don`t like me remember it's mind over matter..I don't mind and you don't matter..