when night comes

[sweets]

our memories return to us
see,touch ,or enjoy with
those memories which we do not know when how why we had

our memories back as vision ghost song or smile
but unfortunately we can not remember for whom so we cry

we might feel sick for these memories
but we always wait such nights to live thorough it and remember or try to

[Annaa]

I`m happy that I will give first comment 4 ur poem .
I like it very much.
Keep it sweets.

[sweets]

thanx honey

[shakespear]

hi sweet and congratulations
sorry koz i wasnot the 1st who read ur great poems but forgive me that long time ago i didn`t visit this club.
ur poem seem deep and sad .it rather reminds me the dark , don`t ask me why koz i don`t know the cause and its very close to my heart and now i know why koz it reflects the feelings inside my heart. sometimes i feel i who wrote it because of the style.
in ur poem u used "or" twice "song or smile" and "remember or try to" and u succeed in that, even at 1st time i read
it i feel its heavy on ears but its ok.
congatulations again and ahead , really u r a poetess.
good luck
c u later
bye

[sweets]

shakespear
before any thing thank you so much for ur words they are really give me power to write

when we are going to read new poem
iam looking to read something with joy for u and i know u can do it

cheeeeeeeeeers

[shakespear]

hi sweey
thnx 4 ur reply
go ahead
don`t pay attention to whom say that u r not a poetess
trust me
c u
good luck
bye

[sweets]

(don`t pay attention to whom say that u r not a poetess)

no oone said so wether iam poetess or not for me i do not care since ican express myself in the way i like
thanx for being care

cheeeeeeeeeeers

[teardrops]

I like it