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Eyes-language

Postby shakespear » Thu Aug 07, 2008 8:25 am

To the lovely foreign dumb woman

Eyes-language

Don`t veil your eyes
They are the loveliest part you have
They are the windows of your spirit
And through them I can travel inside you
So don`t veil your eyes
And let me swim in your spring
* * *
Your eyes are fathomless
But I can probe them
You are always silent
But through your eyes
I can understand you
So don`t veil your eyes
And let me fly in your sky

* * *
You look at me and I look at you
You understand me and I understand you
You move your lips hoping to speak
And I fidget in my seat hoping
to hear your voice
And even if you speak
I can`t understand you
We have different tongues
So don`t veil your eyes
And let me die in your lap
* * *
our life is like a night mare
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Re: Eyes-language

Postby sweets » Thu Aug 07, 2008 5:01 pm

hi shakespear

againe same sad missing tone in ur poem i know that u know that life is mixture between pain and passion but we always look to positive side of life so try and look at iam sure that u need time to see

in general i like ur poem cuz this time is about eyes language and i know how meanings it carry

best wishes

cheeeeeeeeeeers
دخلت حياتي كنسمة وخرجت منها كإعصار
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Re: Eyes-language

Postby shakespear » Sat Aug 09, 2008 12:45 pm

hi sweet
ur words is better than my poem
c u later
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Re: Eyes-language

Postby loola » Sat Aug 09, 2008 11:45 pm

thanks my friend for ur poem ..
nice words , really i like it
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Re: Eyes-language

Postby shakespear » Tue Aug 19, 2008 3:47 pm

hi loola
u r very kind and ur words encourage me and i think every one needs to be encouraged from time to time
thnx again
good luck and bye
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Re: Eyes-language

Postby ailema » Wed Sep 03, 2008 2:59 pm

thast a very very nice writing there and its really expresing feelings of the maker
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Re: Eyes-language

Postby shakespear » Sat Sep 06, 2008 2:32 pm

hi my friend
thnx very much 4 these words and i hope we meet again in future
thnx agsin and c u later
buye
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Re: Eyes-language

Postby shakespear » Sat Nov 22, 2008 11:14 am

hi everyone and goodluck
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Re: Eyes-language

Postby farah » Wed Mar 04, 2009 8:42 am

is it a real story or imagination?
we have to live our life freely
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Re: Eyes-language

Postby Mohyiedine » Wed Apr 22, 2009 1:18 pm

hey friend, i noticed this poem it has a deep meaning without doubting, not only that also i observed you can express more than thus Coz you have ability to do it , in general you are good and i like it.
in finally i wish to you develop your ability and be a famous poet
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