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Come to me

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Come to me

Postby LoOost » Fri Sep 26, 2008 12:19 pm

Hi everybody,
Iwant to write a subject and I want you to tell my mistakes.

One day, I will go, Iwill go and stop loving you. Because I am too tired, I can`t go on with you any more. I don`t know if you will miss me or try to find me. All I know that I am going to forget you, and if I think of you in someday, I will never try to see you or even call you. Because I know that you don`t care for me as I do. So you don`t deserve me, but if you feel like you need me, YOU come to me and I will forgive you.


waiting for your comments.
Have a nice day.......
SOME people MAKE the WORLD special JUST by BEING in IT...,
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Re: Come to me

Postby teardrops » Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:58 pm

It's a nice poem, but sad.
Raindrops,my teardrops. Falling from above,i dont have your love.
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