hi everybody here is my last poem (ı called like this:)) waiting your comments...
hard way
ı can not let to fall down
if ı do,there is a man
at the soundless garden
with his back
againts the willow,
who is me.
I can not let to fall down
for obscuring this shame
ı do the games,sing a song
for hiding the millenarian authentics
from me and you.
ı can not let to fall down
cook the things what ı ate
in my old saucepan
and fill my ego
with this dated story
that is me...
here is mine..:)
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Re: here is mine..:)
Good poem wolfshade.
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Re: here is mine..:)
This poem makes you think and wonder.
Raindrops,my teardrops. Falling from above,i dont have your love.
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Re: here is mine..:)
thanks for your comments...