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here is mine..:)

Postby wolfshade » Thu Oct 09, 2008 4:14 pm

hi everybody here is my last poem (ı called like this:)) waiting your comments...

hard way


ı can not let to fall down

if ı do,there is a man

at the soundless garden

with his back

againts the willow,

who is me.


I can not let to fall down

for obscuring this shame

ı do the games,sing a song

for hiding the millenarian authentics

from me and you.


ı can not let to fall down

cook the things what ı ate

in my old saucepan

and fill my ego

with this dated story

that is me...
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Re: here is mine..:)

Postby imad » Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:03 pm

Good poem wolfshade. {-; {-; {-:
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Re: here is mine..:)

Postby teardrops » Fri Oct 17, 2008 9:02 pm

This poem makes you think and wonder.
Raindrops,my teardrops. Falling from above,i dont have your love.
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Re: here is mine..:)

Postby wolfshade » Sat Oct 18, 2008 7:33 pm

thanks for your comments...
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